I can't take it.
It's turned into a physical pain.
An ache in my heart.
It's killing me.
Strangling me,
It won't let go.
An abuse I've never felt before.
But I know it's nothing...
Compared to what they feel everyday.
Their skin peeled from their bones.
Their bodies changed unnaturally.
Beaten and bloody.
Heads hanging low.
You can count their ribs,
While they tuck their tails.
There's nothing we can do.
But there has to be something.
I'm 14 years old.
I can't drive.
I can't go to China,
I can't go anywhere to help.
I'm done signing petitions that do nothing in the end.
I'm done with words.
I want action that will never come.
Can't you see the soul in those eyes?
Feel the pain that they feel?
They show more compassion than humans could ever know.
Yet we snap their necks,
We kick them,
We trap them in cages two times too small for them.
We torture them in every imaginable way.
There's got to be something...
There's got to be something we can do.
I don't believe in religion and God,
But lord look down,
Do something.
How can we let animals die for no reason everyday?
Not humane deaths,
Torture.
It hurts.
This inability to do anything.













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Maybe words cannot change things, but they can help. everything, at this stage, helps.
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Humans are horrible bastards, the world would be much better without them.
I wish there were something we could do. That would actually make an influence.
If it were up to me I would start reinforcing capitol punishment. Quarter the lot of em. Sick, twisted psychos.
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In the second stanza, in the fifth line, you repeat the use of the word 'bodies'. My suggestion would be to remove this completely, it would add more of...a sort of feeling, you know?
"China" and "God" should be capitalized. Cuz, they're nouns... sort of... yeah.
Sorry.
Nah, tis fine. I wrote on the whim of a moment when I could hardly take it anymore, there are sure to be a lot of mistakes through out. I didn't even bother to read it over. xD
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Agreed. I often think that everyone would be better off if humans had never excisted, and by everyone, I mean everyone but humans. Heh.
I know... I mean, even if newspapers would let us, teenagers, write an article or two about animal abuse. But they won't... I looked into it yesterday. Heh heh. At least, the local one here won't.
Aye. Their punishment being whatever they did to the animals.
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Pretty good poem for 'the whim of a moment'. Pretty good poem.
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